Potřebuji pomoc s esejí

Zdravím, nové pololetí jsem nezačal moc dobře v angličtině a potřeboval bych z tohoto dopisu (dopis týkající se odpovědi ohledně exchange pobytu) jedničku, jestli byste mi pomohli a našli případné chyby.Byl bych vám moc vděčný.

Dear David,

thank you for your message. As you know, my name is Markus, and I am 18 years old and I live in a family house with my parents and my three little sisters. But our house is really big so you needn´t to worry about anything. It is fantastic, that you play guitar. I am drummer since my childhood. So don´t forget your guitar at home.

I live in a small village near Hamburg called Wenzendorf. In our village isn´t really anything interesting, but it´s not a problem to get to Hamburg. which is only 15 kilometres far away.

The weather is quite similar as it is in your country. Here also rains a lot and it is quite cold in the spring. So don´t forget your kagoul.

Tell me please at what time will your train arrive and I will pick you up at the trainstation. Please reply soon.

Best regards Markus

1. My name is Markus, I am 18 years old and I live in a house with my parents and three little sisters (trochu jsem zredukoval spojky a determinátory, POZOR: family house je tak trochu Czenglish)
2. …so you don't have to worry… (needn't můžete s klidem vypustit ze svého slovníku, své dny slávy má dost výrazně za sebou…)
3. It's fantastic that you play the guitar. I've been playing drumms since I was a kid, so don't forget to take your guitar with you!
4. In our village, there isn't anything really interesting
5. stačí “as in your country”. Here it rains a lot as well
6. Let me know what time your train arrives…

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