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Will it clink this year?

At this year's ice hockey world championship, which is playing in Paris and Cologne, joined the Czech team under the direction of coach Jandac. Will they reach the medal or leave disappointed at home? The first match against Canada, Czech team lost, but then they won against Belarus, Finland, Norway and Slovenia. To date Saturday 13.5. has Czech team 10 points and they are in second place on the board of group B. However, Czech players can’t asleep at the laurels, because they are still waiting for 2 games in the group, which could make them an uncomfortable way for a medal. How will everything going we will know tomorrow when we play the penultimate match against France.

1. …which is being played…, the Czech team came with coach Jandak in charge (nemůže být “at this year's … joined the team”, to na sebe nenavazuje)
2. …or leave for home disappointedly?
3. The first match was againt Canada…
4. To Saturday May 13th, the Czech team has 10 points and they are second on the group B board. (vedlejší věta musí začínat podmětem, ne slovesem jako v němčině)
5. However, Czech players can't rest on their laurels (https://slovniky.lingea.cz/…cesky/laurel), because they still have 2 group games ahead of them, which could make their way for a medal more complicated.
6. We'll find out about the result tomorrow after the

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1. …which is being played…, the Czech team came with coach Jandak in charge (nemůže být “at this year's … joined the team”, to na sebe nenavazuje)
2. …or leave for home disappointedly?
3. The first match was againt Canada…
4. To Saturday May 13th, the Czech team has 10 points and they are second on the group B board. (vedlejší věta musí začínat podmětem, ne slovesem jako v němčině)
5. However, Czech players can't rest on their laurels (https://slovniky.lingea.cz/…cesky/laurel), because they still have 2 group games ahead of them, which could make their way for a medal more complicated.
6. We'll find out about the result tomorrow after the

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