Please help me with my homework

 

Hello English lovers, Can you help me with my voluntary homework? Please check it out and tell me every single mistakes that you can see and explain me why it isn't correct. Then I can improve myself. I mean definite and indefinite article, grammar mistakes, bad formlutaion, wording etc. Thanks a million

Dear Sir or Madam,

Application for the post of waiter

I noticed the online advertisement for a waiter during the summer months and I am writing to apply for the job.

In October, I am going to study economics at Charles University. Until then, I would like to work abroad and have a part time job in London. I assume waiter would be suitable and appropriate post for me.

I have experience of working at restaurants and hotels. Two years ago, I worked three months like a waiter at a five stars restaurant in Prague. Last summer, I spent two months like a chef’s help in a restaurant’s kit­chen. Furthermore, I believe that I have what it takes for the post of the waiter. I am willing, reliable, polite and
hard-working. I can communicate in English, German, Czech and Vietnamese language.

I am enclosing my CV, including my full contact details.

I look forward to hearing from you soon

Yours faithfully,

Nguyen

 

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