Prosím o opravu. Je to důležité. Děkuji.

Krásný den přeji,
mám za úkol popsat můj den. Jsem ve třeťáku, takže nevím, jestli jsem to zadání pochopila dobře. Každopádně prosím o kontrolu a opravu.
Tady mam zadání.

1) being at school
2) describe one day of last week
3) evaluation of the whole week

Děkji moc a hezký den všem.

Dear Laura,
last week wasn't good. I was at home first three days because I was sick. Then I went to school.
i will describe you one day of that week.
I woke up at seven o'clock and then i got up. After breakfast i got dressed and i went to school. My fist lesson started at eight o'clock. Lessons were so long. I must say I was bored. At twelve o'clock I rode at home by bus. I lwas looking forward my lunch. the weather was nice so i was in the garden and I spent time with my turtles. I went for a walk in the evening. I had a shower before a dinner and then a watched tv. At ten o'clock i went sleep.
Whole week was frustrating and boring.
lots of love
Terka
P.S. I hope you had a better week.

Mé návrhy:

Dear Laura, last week wasn't good. I was at home first three days because I was sick. Then I went to school. i will describe to you one day of that week. I woke up at seven o'clock and then i got up. After breakfast i got dressed and i went to school. My first lesson started at eight o'clock. Lessons were so (rather/very/ too) long. I must say I was bored. At twelve o'clock I went at home by bus/ I took bus to get home. I was looking forward to my lunch. The weather was nice so i was in the garden and I spent (some) time with my turtles. I went for a walk in the evening. I had a shower before a dinner and then I watched tv. At ten o'clock i went to bed. The whole week was frustrating and boring. lots of love Terka P.S. I hope you had a better week.

Ja by som to napísala asi takto :

Dear Laura, ** last week wasn't good. I was at home the first three days because I was sick. Then I went to the school. I am going to describe you one day of that week. I woke up at seven o'clock and then I got up. After breakfast I got dressed and I went to school. My fist lesson started at eight o'clock. The lessons were so long. I have to say I got bored. At twelve o'clock I went home by bus. I was looking forward to my lunch. The weather was nice, so I was in the garden and I spent time with my turtles. I went for a walk in the evening. I had a shower before a dinner and then I watched TV. At ten o'clock I went to bed. The whole week was frustrating and boring. Terka P.S. I hope you had a better week.

Nemyslím, že “..to the school” je správně, leda by se tam nešla učit..

Ach, ano, nemá tam byť člen.