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Ahoj ve škole jsme dostali zadání napsat essay na tema " Learning English: My own experienceů … Na gymplu jsme essay moc nepsali takže si nejsem jistá … navíc to má být formal-to-neutral style, čím si taky nejsem jistá je jestli se držím jenom britské nebo americké angličtiny ( to by asi taky chtělo ujednotit ) spíš si myslím že je to tak namíchané.. Tak kdyby mi někdo mohl pomoci byla bych vděčná ocením jakoukoliv pomoc a názor děkuju moc Tady je essay :

Learning English: My own experience

As I went through primary and high school, I met a lot of teachers. When was younger I would say, that some of them were good and some not, but now I would say that each of them had a different style of teaching. At primary school I began to learn English when I was in 2nd grade. This course was a preparatory, after school course which should prepare us for the time when we will have mandatory lessons at school. During the eight years in high school I had five different teachers. I think that the last two were also the best, because their style of teaching suited me. That is because they did not prepare their lessons using only the textbook, but they prepared other activities. We used to watch films or interesting videos or read some short-stories, and then we discussed them. When I was thirteen years old, I think, I really commenced to love English. I began to read books written in English and also bilingual books, I also found plenty of internet web sites, where people can publish their works. I commenced to watch films in English but with English subtitles and TV series almost form all over the world with original dubbing ad English subtitles. From all the books and short-stories, films and TV series I attained more knowledge about English than from the teachers. I learnt a lot about grammar through observation, about the use of certain words. I acquired lot of knowledge about idioms and their use and meanings. I learnt a lot just through media such as internet and Television. I learnt things that, I think, I would not have learnt during regular English lessons. I think that it is best to let the students try and find their own way to language, if that is possible, or the teacher can suggest some ways, devices and even demonstrate how to use them.

Co vidím na první pohled – je to nějaký text, který nemá odstavce.. Minimálně bys měla mít úvodní odstavec, pak stať, nakonec závěrečný odstavec. Stať se dá opět rozdělit do menších odstavců podle obsahu sdělení. Tu svou práci musíš nějak uvést – o čem budeš psát. Pak to rozvedeš v dalším (dalších) odstavcích. Rozdělit odstavce můžeš na výhody a nevýhody (ať už obecné nebo v tomhle případě ze svých vlastních zkušeností), nebo třeba na různá období (např. zkušenosti z 1.,2.st.ZŠ, SŠ), atp. V závěrečném odstavci vše shrneš a vyjádříš nějaký svůj názor (který by měl odrážet to, co jsi psala v prvním odstavci – tam vlastně napíšeš, co budeš rozebírat, pak ve stati rozebereš, v posl. odstavci uzavřeš nějakým shrnutím).

Odstavce jsou v souboru ve wordu po tom co jsem to sem zkopírovala tak mi z nějakého důvodu nešlo je znovu udělat… nevím proč.. tohle se mi ale stává… úvodní by měl končit slovy “different style of teaching” pak další je " at primary school… mandatory lessons" pak jsou další a poslední odstavec začíná “I think that it is best to let students..”… ale za rady diky…

Zkusila jsem uplatnit nějaké rady… tentokrát snad se mi povedlo i po zkopírování udělat odstavce ( ani nevím jak se to stalo ) kdyby ale zmizely tak jsem se pokusila počáteční slova vyznačit tučně…

Learning English: My own experience I would like to write about my experience with learning English, as I went through primary and high school. I would like to present my opinion about different methods of learning English, such as self-learning, reading books, watching TV series and films or in class under the supervision of a teacher. At primary school I began to learn English when I was in 2nd grade. This course was a preparatory course which should prepare us for the time when we will have mandatory lessons at school. During the eight years in high school I had five different teachers. I think that the last two were also the best, because their style of teaching suited me. That is because they did not prepare their lessons using only the textbook, but they prepared other activities. We used to watch films or interesting videos or read some short-stories, and then we discussed them. When I was thirteen years old, I think, I really commenced to love English. I began to read books written in English and also bilingual books, I also found plenty of internet web sites, where people can publish their works. I commenced to watch films in English but with English subtitles and TV series almost form all over the world with original dubbing ad English subtitles. From all the books and short-stories, films and TV series I attained more knowledge about English than from the teachers. I learnt a lot about grammar through observation, about the use of certain words. I acquired lot of knowledge about idioms and their use and meanings. I learnt a lot just through media such as internet and Television. I learnt things that, I think, I would not have learnt during regular English lessons. I think that it is best to let the students try and find their own way to language, if that is possible, or the teacher can suggest some ways, devices and even demonstrate how to use them.

jelikož zmizely jsem ráda že zůstalo alespoň tučné vyznačení… první odstavec začíná slovy " I would like to .. " " Learning English: My own experience" je nadpis která byl původně o řádek výše …

As I went through (návrh: during the years at the) primary and high school, I met a lot of teachers. When I was younger I would say, that some of them were good and some not, but now I would rather say that each of them had a different style of teaching. At primary school I began to learn English when I was in the 2nd grade. This course was a preparatory one (nebo bez členu před příd.jm.), after school course , which that should was supposed to prepare us for the time when we will would have mandatory lessons at school. During the eight years in at high school I had five different teachers. I also think that the last two were also the best, because their style of teaching suited me. That is because they did not prepare their lessons using only the textbooks, but they prepared other activities. We used to watch films or interesting videos or read some short-stories, and then we discussed (asi bych volila radši talk about) them. When I was thirteen years old, I think, I really commenced (Je to hodně formální… stejně jako dále ACQUIRE… K neutrálnímu zbytku mi to přijde trochu jako pěst na oko…) to love English. I began to read books written in English and also bilingual books, I also found plenty of internet web sites, where people can publish their works. I commenced (dtto)to watch films in English but with English subtitles and TV series almost form from all over the world with original dubbing ad English subtitles. From all the books and short-stories, films and TV series I attained more knowledge about (Získala jste více znalostí o angličtině jako jazyku – historii, postavení ve světě – nebo spíše znalosti jazyka samotného? Pokud to druhé, doporučovala bych spíše předložku of) English than from the teachers. I learnt a lot about grammar through observation, about the use of certain words. I acquired lot of a good knowledge about of idioms and their use and meanings. I learnt a lot just through media such as internet and Television (buď obě velká nebo obě malá). I learnt things that, I think, I would not have learnt during regular English lessons. I think that it is best to let the students try and find their own way to language, if that is possible, or the teacher can suggest some ways, devices and even demonstrate how to use them.

A sakra… opravovala jsem původní verzi. Tak snad si to dáte dohromady. 

Děkuju i tak původní se od novější neliší úplně 

to je to s čím bych právě potřebovala pomoct.. zadaní bylo formal-to-neutral style.. ale na gymplu sme se sotva tohle učili… ani esejů sme moc nepsaly takže mám problém s tím se držet jednoho stylu snažila jsem se aby to bylo formálnější ale protože to neumím moc dobře posoudit tak jsem ji sem dala, pro případ že by někdo mohl pomoci 

Zkuste si nejdříve vyhledat na netu, jak psát esej, tady by to vydalo na ten článek. 

Trošku bych sjednotil používání termínů.
Chvilinku je americký systém: high school, grade -jako třídě
pak zase britské primary school na místo grade school nebo elementary school. Pak LS opraví na at high school z in high school. Pozor na člen the Internet.

Pravda, pravda, swimmer Ještě opravuji Television na television nebo TV.

television byl preklep ani sem nevedela ze to tam je …

Tak upravená verze pro případ že by tam něco bylo ( jako že bude tim sem si téměř jista ) opět se omlouvam kdyby tam nebyly odstavce, moc nerozumim tomu proč to nejde… tak se to pokusim nějak označit pro připad že by označeni selhalo tak odstavce jsou ve wordu a jsou važně hezký  Essay:

I would like to write about my experience with learning English, as I went through primary and high school. I would like to present my opinion about different methods of learning English, such as self-learning, reading books, watching TV series and films or in class under the supervision of a teacher. At primary school I began to learn English when I was in the 2nd year. This course was a preparatory course that was supposed to prepare us for the time when we would have mandatory lessons at school. During the eight years at secondary school I had five different teachers. I also think that the last two were the best, because their style of teaching suited me. That is because they did not prepare their lessons using only textbooks, but they prepared other activities. We used to watch films or interesting videos or read some short-stories, and then we talked about them. When I was thirteen years old, I really commenced to love English. I began to read books written in English and also bilingual books, I also found plenty of internet web sites, where people can publish their works. I commenced to watch films in English but with English subtitles and television series almost form all over the world with original dubbing ad English subtitles. From all the books and short-stories, films and television series I attained more knowledge of English than from the teachers. I learnt a lot about grammar through observation, about the use of certain words. I acquired a good knowledge of idioms and their use and meanings. I learnt a lot just through media such as internet and television. I learnt things that, I think, I would not have learnt during regular English lessons. I think that it is best to let the students try and find their own way to language, if that is possible, or the teacher can suggest some ways, devices and even demonstrate how to use them.

Už jsem třeba psal, že Internet vyžaduje určitý člen, the Internet, ale stejně jste to tam nezakomponovala. From my part, there's no point suggesting any other changes.