My best friend

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My best friend My best friend is my ex-schoolmate. My best friend's name is Lukas. He lives in Pilsen. We met four years ago at school. He is a guy at my age. I think we are quite good friends. He has got a small figure, because his figure is muscular. He has got dark green eyes and his lips are full. His face is oval. He is very slim.He usually wears his favourite blue jeans or gray trousers. He has got short brown hair. He is very clever, generous, tolerant, dependable, trustworthy and quite frank, although to some people he may seem shy, lazy, cheeky and arrogant. He plays football and online PC games with me. We play Fifa or haxball. Fifa is a football simulator. Haxball is 2D football. We have a team. Team name is HAX.We hated accountancy and economy, but we likes computer techniques, statistics and maths. I go to Bussines Academy in Pilsen and he goes to Masaryk Bussines Academy in Prag. We have got the same objects. When we are together we play bowling, snooker and darts. We often go out with my other friends. His favorite color is blue. He does not like red. His favorite team is Chelsea. He does not like Barcelona because Barcelona simulates.

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He has got a small figure, because his figure is muscular.

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Haxball is 2D football PC game.
The team's name is HAX.
We hated Accountancy and Economy, but we likes Computer Techniques, Statistics and Maths.
I go to the Bussiness Aca­demy in Pilsen and he goes to the Masaryk Bussiness Aca­demy in Prague.
We have got the same objects subjects.
His favourite colour is blue.
He does not like red colour.
His favourite team is Chelsea.
… because Barcelona simulates players often dive

Vysvětlivky: v britské angličtině, kterou máš na začátku (vazba have got)¨se píše favourite, colour, v americké favorite, color. Pokud upřednostňuješ americkou, uprav tedy have got na např. “His eyes are dark green.”
SIMULOVAT (ve fotbale) se řekne dive.