Kontrola vyraznych chyb

Dobry den, mohu poprosit o zbeznou kontrolu, jestli je to takto vícemene vporadku? Dekuji(jde jen o popis povolani)

Surgeon

The surgeon is a physician who focuses on the operative treatment and treatment of illness or injury. I think that surgeons have a risky occupation. Surgeon should be careful, able to cope with stress and crisis situations. The power required by higher education medical direction. He should keep a clear mind.

Shop assistant

I think that shop assistant have not definitely dangerous work. For me this work is boring, because they have to be always in one place and this I do not like. Also must be able to count money. Shop assistant would be nice and smiling on the customers. This a profession requires ability, because people do not have to wait an hour to checkout

I think that shop assistant have not definitely dangerous work.

I think that shop assistant does not have…

Shop assistant should be …

diky, a to spojeni na zakazniky(on the costumers) a toto “because people do not have to wait an hour to checkout” je ok? nemelo by tam byt …do not have TIME to wait an hour ON checkout?

Ano, s tím TIME to dává smysl. Ještě: This a profession requires ability – tady bych vynechal člen, jelikož už tam stojí ukazovací zájmeno.

and this I do not like. – Dal bych buď: I do not like that, nebo and this is what I do not like (dislike)

Dekuji, a to ON checkout je taky vporadku, nebo tam dat neco jinyho(napr. near..)? Jinak by to mohlo byt spravne už? A jeste, nebylo by vhodnejsi dat For operation is required by higher education medical direction místo The power required by higher education medical direction?

Osobně bych dal spíš předložku for checkout, ale radši bych ještě počkal na názory ostatních.

Tohle by chtělo přeformulovat úplně.

No, jestli by bylo vhodnejsi dat místo to checkout → ON checkout(nebo for jak si říkal) a místo The power required by higher education medical direction dát → For operation is required by higher education medical direction?

The power required by higher education medical direction dát → For operation is required by higher education medical direction?

Nevím, jakou myšlenku chceš přesně vyjádřit, ale zkusil bych třebas toto:

Surgeon must be properly educated in order to carry out operations.

jistě někdo přijde s lepšími návrhy.

Chtel bych vyjadrit : K výkonu je vyžadováno vysokoškolské vzdělání lékařského směru.

Tak třeba: In order to carry out operations, college education in medical field is required.