Oliver Twist

Dobrý den, jak byste prosím opravili tento text, děkuji. Last book which I read was Oliver Twist. This book is written by Charles Dickens. Oliver Twist is a little boy. His mum died, when he was born. His dad wasn’t kown. He grew in hospital. In hospital lived poor old people or children without parents. Mister Bumble managed the hospital. One day Oliver wanted to get second food and Mister Bumble was very angry to him. He had to leave the hospital. He worked in funeral home. There was a boy Claypod und he bullied Oliver. So Oliver run away in the morning. He went to London. He met a bunch of thieves. The leader of bunch named Fagin. One day thieves stole something I they ran away. Oliver stayed there and police arrested him. They found he is all right. Mister Brownlow who was stolen by thieves cared about Oliver. But thieves catch Oliver again. They made him stole. They went with Oliver stole to Mayli’s house. There lived mrs Mayli with her niece Roza. Oliver was shot in his arm by valet and thieves run away. The family cared about Oliver and they loved him. Oliver had a good time there. Nancy was a girl in bunch of thieves. She heard Fagin and Monks talking about Oliver and her mother’s jewel. She find he has got a step brother Monks and he is very rich. She said it to Roza. Nancy was killed by her partner, when he found it. Police started look for the bunch of thieves and they arrested Fagin. In the end Mister Brownlow adopt Oliver.

In hospital lived poor old people or children… – V této větě bych asi již použil určitý člen, protože ta nemocnice už byla jednou zmíněna a zde jí blíže určujeme.

One day thieves stole something I they ran away. – Smysl této věty nechápu, zřejmě se s tím I jedná o překlep.

1. His mum died when he was born (bez čárky před “when”)
2. He grew up in a hospital.
3. In the hospital lived poor, old people
4. Mr. Bumble was the manager of the hospital.
5. Moc nechápu spojení “the second food”. Jestli myslíte “druhé jídlo” (= druhou porci jídla), tak to je “the second portion of food”, nebo jednoduše “One day Oliver wanted to get more food…”
6. Mister Bumble was very angry at him
7. There was a boy called Claypod.
8. Oliver ran away in the morning.
9. The leader of the bunch was called Fagin.
10. Tato věta je vskutku nesmyslná.
11. Thieves caught Oliver again.
12. They forced him to steal/to become a thief
13. They went to Mayli's house with Oliver.
14. Mrs. Mayli lived there with her niece Roza.
15. Oliver was hot in his arm by a valet.
16. The family looked after/kept after Oliver…
17. Nancy was a girl in the bunch of thieves.
18. …and her mother's jewels.
19. She found out that he has got
20. Nancy was killed by her partner when… (opět bez čárky)
21. The police started to look/started looking
22. …adopted Oliver.

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