neformální dopis - kontrola

Dear friend Barbara! For first time I thank you so much for your present – CD from metal group Nightwish. I love this group. They are from my favourite country Finland. My discography is complete now thanks to you. And what have been your Christmas? My Christmas was very comfortable and funny because we were together in our new house. That was amazing time and I´m happy that I´ve got so lovely family. They gave me a lot of wonderful gifts. And what were your presents? I hope that were wonderful presents as mine.But my best gift is definitelly trip to Finland! So exciting! I am crazy about Finland. I promise that I´ll send letter for you. So I thank you again for a CD! Look forward to seeing you soon! Yours sincerely…

Budu ráda, když mi poradíte co je tam špatně popřípadě co by se tam dalo přidat, aby to bylo zajimavější… Děkuju!:o)

Mé návrhy:

For first time I thank you so much for your present – Správně je for the first time, ale já bych asi použil first, I…

And what have been your Christmas – takto určitě ne. Třeba: How did you spend Christmas?

I hope that they were as wonderful as mine.

I am looking forward to seeing you soon!

Nadpis upravuji a příště prosím o kratší verzi, má to být nadpis vlákna, ne román. Díky.

pro jistotu ještě sem vložím starý názav vlákna:

Zdravím..:) Máme za úkol napsat neformální dopis, tak bych chtěla vědět, jestli je to aspoň trochu dobře :o)

Thank you for the CD again. – Ještě jednou díky za to (již jednou zmíněné) CD.