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I regret that you could not go on our school trip with you. We was accomodated in a luxury hotel. Our hotel lie next to a sea. From the balcony I observed a big ships which sailed on the sea. In the area there are a lot of shops, pubs, restaurants. I bought some souvenirs for you. Now I am telling you, what we did every day. We was on this trip for two days. First day we visitek the muzeum of european history and sailed (floated) around a islands by small boat. Second day we had free time so I sunbathed on the beach for whole this day. I enjoyed it because I like a sunny weather. How did you enjoy your holiday and what did you do?

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I regret that you couldn't go on the school trip with us (předpokládám, že jste chtěla říct toto). We were accomodated in a luxury hotel, which was set/located next to the sea. From the balcony I could observe large ships sailing on the sea. In the area there were lots of shops, pubs, restaurants… I bought some souvenirs for you. Now I could/will tell you about our programme. We spent two days there. The first day we visited the museum of european history and sailed (floated) around some/several islands in a small boat. The second day we had a free time so I spent the whole day sunbathing on the beach. I enjoyed it because I like when the weather is sunny. How did you enjoy your holiday and what did you do?

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I regret that you couldn't go on the school trip with us. We were accommodated in a luxury hotel, which was set/located next to the sea. From the balcony I could observe large ships sailing on the sea. In the area there were lots of shops, pubs, restaurants… I bought some souvenirs for you. Now I could/will tell you about our programme. We spent two days there. The first day we visited the museum of European history and sailed (floated) around some/several islands in a small boat. The second day we had some free time so I spent the whole day sunbathing on the beach. I enjoyed it because I like when the weather is sunny. How did you enjoy your holiday and what did you do?