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Ahoj, jsem tady dnes poprvé, takže moc nevím, jak to tady chodí Každopádně jsem chtěl někoho poprosit, kdyby my mohl zkontrolovat esej a článek do školy. Blíží se uzavírání známek, tak to chci mít co nej díky za všechny příspěvky ;)

Fashion industry in our lives

It is said that clothes we wear can show a big part of our characters but is it really true? For some it seems as a nonsense, for the others it is essential. In this essay I intend to examine the issue of importance of people’s appe­arance.

First of all, our lives are extremely influenced by fashion magazines and TVs. In my opinion, this could be dangerous for teenagers especially for young girls who are convinced that the appearance is the most important things in their lives. On the other hand, if someone has a high position in his job, I think his appearance should be representative, because the majority of us judge the other exactly by the appearance.

Secondly, we used to think that high price means quality but this is the past. For instance, we go to a shopping mall where an enormous amount of designer’s labels is, we can choose from. Each of them is extremely expensive, but if you want a quality it could be difficult to find to find just one piece.

Last but not least, I think we should start to behave more ecological. Maybe making clothes from eco-friendly materials or buying something in second-hands could improve the environment.

In conclusion, I think that clothes is an important part of our lives, but it is not essential. In addition, these days it could be really hard to find something modern and suitable for a good price.

Music and me

What are you doing when you feel upset, sad or just down in the dumps? I listen to music. To be honest I listen to music every time I can- in a bus, in a car, even though when I have a shower. And I have to say that your favourite music is the best treatment on a bad mood, but it’s essential to make a good choice.

When I feel sad I listen to metal or rock, because it’s full of energy and power, which I need. On the other hand, when I need to relax I listen to classic music. Beethoven’s or Mozart’s symphonies are just fantastic and they take me to the other magical world full of piece.

I have to admit myself, I don’t like pop music. Although, when I’m with my friends it’s obviously that pop or funk is the best choice. It has always simple lyrics and catchy melody. Moreover, I can’t imagine dancing with my girlfriend on something else.

To add another point, going to some music festival or a gig is – in my eyes – wonderful way to spend my free time. I recommend visiting the Colours of Ostrava – there is an incredible atmosphere.

Mé návrhy:

For instance, we go to a shopping mall where an enormous amount of designer’s labels is, we can choose from.

• tak této větě nějak nerozumím, možná bez toho from by to smysl dávalo.

For instance, when we go to a shopping mall where there is an enormous amount of designer’s labels, we can choose.

..I think we should start to behave more ecologically – tady bych osobně použil příslovce.

To be honest I listen to music every time I can- in a bus, in a car, even though when I have a shower.

I have to admit myself, I don’t like pop music. – Ve významu uznat bez zvratného zájmena.

To be honest, I listen ..

díky ;)