Email - How was my weekend

Ahoj, mám prosbu, bylo by možné zkontrolovat a upozornit na chyby v e-mailu či dopisu o mém víkendu? Všem moc děkuji, hezký den přeji.

Dear William,
I’m so sorry, but I couldn’t call you, becaouse my mobile phone was broken. My mobile phone fell on sidewalk! It’s awful! How was your weekend ?
My weeekend ,exept my mobile phone , was good! In Sunday, I wen’t shopping with my family and some friends my parents! I got really cool clothes. After we went to the restaurant and we had anything to eat and drink. I had a sushi with wasabi sauce – it’s a really good food!
In Sunday evening, I met with some friends. We went to a party and drank drinks! Next day, I was in bed, becaouse I had so lazy and I was ill. In the afternoon, I had to learn – English, Math and I drew pictures.

See you later William,
bye

chyby v e-mailu

My weeekend ,except for (the episode with) my mobile phone.

On Sunday..

I wen’t went shopping with my family and some friends of my parents!

After we went to the restaurant and we had anything to eat and drink.

I had so was lazy and I was ill.

On Sunday evening, (přívlastek)

1. Do první věty bych nedával čárku před “because” (ale to je detail)
2. It fell on the sidewalk (nebo “I dropped it on the sidewalk by accident”)
3. My weekend was pretty good except for the phone accident
4. On Sunday, I went (bez apostrofu) shopping with my family and some of my parents' friends
5. After that se went … and had something…
6. I had sushi… (bez členu)
7. On Sunday evening, I met some friends of mine
8. The next day … because I was so lazy and ill
9. In the afternoon, I had to study

Děkuju moc.