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Internet, life with him and without him

Every day a lot of people use the internet. Internet is type of mass media communication and it became the part ours lifes. It is use children, parents, students and grandparents. According to british´s sci­entist´s inter­net used about 85 percent of population on the Earth.

In my opinion, internet is very helpful and quite safe means communication. Also we can used for chatting, working, playing games, listening music, watching movies and so on.

Unfortunately, internet is means doing bad thing. The people called hackers are doing thing, which are illegal. Many hackers get into different computer and misuse ours data. They also create computer viruses which can destroy the data completly.

To sum up, internet has their pros and cons. Some people think, that everybody can live life without the internet. I think so, too. Despite, I think that the life with internet is more comfortable and save ours time. It is better. Everybody has own opinion.

Ďakujem.

The Internet, life with him it and without it

Every day a lot of people use the the Internet. The Internet is a type of mass media communication and it became the a part ours lifves. It is used by children, parents, students and grandparents. According to British´s sci­entists, the Internet is used by about 85 percent of the population on of the Earth.

Neni cesky original, takze si clovek musi domyslet veci a muze je domyslet jinak, nez autor zamyslel. Internet by se mel psat s velkym pocatecnim “I”. Zopakovani trpenho rodu by urcite nebylo na skodu.

Vzhledem v pomerne velkemu mnozstvi chyb, davam prilezitost pokracovat dalsim.

Internet, life with it and without it. Every day a lot of people use the Internet. Internet is a type of… and it became the part of our lives. It is used by children, parents, students and even by grandparents. According to british scientists about 85% of world population use the Internet. In my opinion, Internet is very helpful (useful) and safe type of communication. We can also use it for chatting, working, playing games, listening to music, watching movies and so on. Unfortunately, Internet can also be very dangerous. People called “hackers” do illegal things. Many hackers get into other people´s computers and misuse their data. They also create computer viruses which can completely destroy our data. To sum up, Internet has its (Myslím, že “pros” a “cons” není dobře, ale teď aktuálně nevím, čím to nahradit). Some people think that (bez čárky) we can live without the Internet. I think so, but I also think that life with Internet is more comfortable and save our time (to moc nechápu). “It is better” bych tam vůbec nedával. Everybody has their own opinion.

Ďakujem obidvom za pomoc.

Karel ďakujem za radu, idem si určite pozrieť ten tŕpný rod

ozacek Ďakujem … a čo keby som to prons a cons nahradil advantage a disadvantage

• I think so, but I also think that life with Internet is more comfortable and save our time.* Je to myslené tak, že že súhlasím s tým, že ide žiť bez internetu ale že si tiež myslím, že život s internetom je pohodlnejší a šetrí nám veľa času.

Ešte raz ďakujem Vám. Thank you.

To FILIP5461: Skúste začať čítať anglické knihy / časopisy / noviny / správy, mohlo by vám to pomôcť sa zlepšiť. Napr. pasív nebudete chápať iba v teoretickej rovine, ale zahliadnete ho v nejakom článku a tým sa vám lepšie všetky pravidla okolo neho zafixujú. Lepšie pochopíte ako sa slová spájajú do prirodzených viet a zároveň si rozšírite slovnú zásobu. Myslím si, že po niekoľko prečítaných knihách by ste mnohé chyby, ktoré ste dnes v eseji urobili už nemali PS: Samozrejme, nie je to (iba) jediná metóda ako sa zlepšiť … 

Ano, šlo by to takto nahradit – jen – množným číslem (advantages, disanvantages).

Tak už chápu, jak jste to myslel… No ale je to špatně (což jsem si taky uvědomil až teď). Má být: Life with the Internet is more comfortable and saves our time. Váže se to pořád k tomu LIFE, takže “life saves”.

Jen k tomu “the Internet has its pros and cons” – ja myslim, ze neni duvod, proc by to neslo pouzit 

I think so – tady mi to prijde takove neohrabane, pouzil bych treba “I agree with them …”, popr. " I think they are right but …".

“Pros and cons” jsem vůbec neznal, takže asi proto bych to něčím nahradil . Zní mi to poněkud hovorově – nevím, jestli se to hodí do školní eseje. S tím “I think so” máte pravdu.