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Dobrý den, jaké mám prosím v tomto textu chyby? Děkuji moc! This story told me our neighbour from cottage. When she was younger she visited her grandpa. He had a farm. He had stroke several years ago and he paralyzed. He was very angry to world. He loved his granddaughter several years ago, but in these day he behave very bad to her. He said to her very impolite things. She was very sad about that, but she try to behave good to him. One day she drove a tractor, but she wasn’t so as good as many years ago. Her grandpa watched her. She made a mistake and she falled down the tractor. She was unconscious and the tractor rode back. Suddently his grandpa was very worried about her and he tried to get up from his wheelchair. It hurt him too much but he continued and he could walk. He broke the tractor and saved the life of his granddaughter.

He was very angry with world . ( be angry with – být naštvaný na někoho )
This story told me our neighbour from a cottage.
She made a mistake and she fell off a tractor.

Our neighbour from our cottage told me this story: When she was younger, she used to visit (samotné “visited” je také v pořádku) her grandpa. He had a farm. He had a stroke several years ago and he was left paralyzed after this accident. Then he started to be angry with all the world. He loved his granddaughter before the accident, but in these days (nebo také “nowadays”) he behaves very badly to her. He tells her very impolite things. At first she was very sad about it, but now she tries to behave well to him. One day she drove a tractor, but she wasn't as good as she was before. …she fell off the tractor. She fell unconscious and the tractor rode back. Suddenly her grandpa was very worried about her and (he) tried to get up from his wheelchair. Zbytek textu je dobře.

Moc děkuji

Dle meho je ANGRY WITH world spatne. Melo by byt ANGRY ABOUT/OVER/AT world. A rekl bych ze se clenem THE

Angry with je správně.

Jakto? Myslel jsem ze se pouziva angry with somebody a ty ostatni predlozky s vecmi.

Taky jsem to četl, ale někde zas,že to tak není.

World může mít i význam lidí, atmosféry, okolností viz slovník.

O tom jsem taky uvazoval, ale z toho prispevku mi to spis sedi na ty okolnosti a tam mi with moc nesedi. Ale mozna se pletu.