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Prosím vás skontrolujete mi tento text(dole) a ak tam mam nejake chyby (čo som presvedčený, že mám)- tak by ste mi ich pls opravili. A ešte ak by sa dalo nejaké vety doplniť.

http://meganfox.sk/

My favourite actress is Megan Fox.
I like she because she is fantastic actress and she is very pretty.
She was born 16.5.1986 in Tennessee.
She have one older sister, but I don´t know her name.
Megan starting her carier as model. After she cintinous as actress.
I like film with her because in there films are more interesing scenes…more action..roman­tic…fun… and so on.
My favourite film with Megan is Transformers.
She plays in films : Transformers, John Hex, Bad boys 2 …and so on.

Ďakujem

I won't give you specific corrections, but will say that in several sentences, you need to check your subject-verb agreement, watch your object pronouns, and also your verb tenses :)

I like her, born in, she has, started, ta 2.veta je nakej paskvil, atd , atd :)

ďakujem za pomoc…

ale prosím vás mohli by ste mi to opraviť aj do textu …? …dakujem

Uz som to upravil

My favourite actress is Megan Fox.
I like her because she is fantastic actress and she is very pretty. Her real name is Megan Denise Fox. She was born 16.5.1986 in Tennessee. She is twenty-four years old. She has got one older sister, but I don´t know her name.
Megan started her career as model. After she continous as actress.
I like film with her because films are more interesing. My favourite film with Megan is Transformers.

Moze byt? Pls mohly by ste mi este nejako vety doplnit. Potrebujem to do zajtra. Dakujem

„She has got one older sister, but I don´t know her name.“

Proč to tam teda píšeš, když to nevíš ? Je takovej problém napsat pár písmen do googlu? :) Jmenuje se Kristi Branim Fox .

Born in, as a model, after that she became an actress…

A myslím, že kdybys tam nechal jenom ten letopočet ( 1986) tak se nikdo zlobit nebude :)

She was born in 1986
ale
She was born on May 16 1986

 

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